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Critique by =ChibiToastcat Jan 4, 2013, 4:32:47 PM
@Awesomesauceical i think the bow is pointed down because he is aiming at something and as you can see is on his knees, crouching. Any ways it is amazing and great doing it in pencil! i also love the backround but i think most of all the leaves are a great effect you get a 9/10! also as far as the originality i think it is very original and the impact was well but not perfect(not to get you down i still love the whole thing) anyways good job!
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~Ankdros Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just a tip ^^ I wanted to put the bow pointed up, really. But it somehow came out as down(maybe it's because I wanted to do another thing, a perspective, can't remember right now). But I want to thank you a lot for the kind critique :tighthug:
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=ChibiToastcat Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh ok well it still looks good either way! (p.s. I actually think it would have been cooler if he was aimingat something like a bunny or a idk.....um a squirrel lol)
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~Ankdros Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe' thanks xD (I see... all right, nice tips ^^)
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=ChibiToastcat Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol your welcome X3 and thanks!
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~Ankdros Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehehe' xD Anytime~~
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